I say, “I love you”

But what can my love offer?

And is it worthy

Of that priceless

Character of yours?

I fear it’s not.



What could I give

to you that’s worthy?

Oh, there is nothing

inside me of value

that’s true.



Prompt: Write a love poem (not a break-up poem or getting dumped poem) using an unexpected emotional tone, such as indignant, self-pitying, mocking, businesslike, etc.



I don't think that I did justice to the prompt on this one. I need more details about his character to make it believable. I used the other poem for class workshop today.